Many, small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does thsi affect local communities? How could this situation be improved?

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Many local stores are forced to
be closed
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because they cannot compete with the supermarkets.
As a result
, lack of product diversity
in addition
financial
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capacity, but
this
can be tackled by
supporting
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from
government
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the government
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and
population
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the population
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in addition
learn
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new skills.
Firstly
, several of
shops
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the shops
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suffer from poor product selection.
In other words
, lacking
of
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product choices leads people who want outdoor products
are
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driven to
the
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large supermarkets.
As a consequence
, there is no doubt that
this
issues
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issue
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will lead to the closure of local
shops
.
Secondly
, financial capacity.
Due to
the weak financial capacity of small
businesses
, they are threatened with extinction, especially in competition with large
businesses
,
Moreover
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small shop workers will lose their jobs and suffer from issues
such
as poverty,
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then
it might lead to bigger problems,
for instance
, homelessness. One effective solution to deal with
this
issue is
that
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government
and
population
support
.
That is
to say, the
government
and the
population
should
support
and help small
businesses
to develop furtherFor example, the
government
should cooperate with small
businesses
in several aspects,
such
as reducing taxes, which would these
businesses
, grow and succeed in the future. As for the
support
of the
population
, it will be in terms of appreciation and moral
support
. Showing appreciation to the owners of small
shops
when visiting their
shops
or interacting with them encourages them to continue. In conclusion,
,
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when small
businesses
or
shops
close,
this
damage will
also
affect society in many ways.
nevertheless
,
government
and
population
support
has an effective impact on solving
this
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