Many, small local shops are closing as they are unable to compete with large supermarkets in the area. How does thsi affect local communities? How could this situation be improved?

Many local stores are forced to

be closed

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because they cannot compete with the supermarkets.

As a result

, lack of product diversity

in addition

financial

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capacity, but

this

can be tackled by

supporting

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from

government

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the government

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and

population

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the population

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in addition

learn

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new skills.

Firstly

, several of

shops

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suffer from poor product selection.

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, lacking

of

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product choices leads people who want outdoor products

are

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driven to

the

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large supermarkets.

As a consequence

, there is no doubt that

this

issues

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will lead to the closure of local

shops

.

Secondly

, financial capacity.

Due to

the weak financial capacity of small

businesses

, they are threatened with extinction, especially in competition with large

businesses

,

Moreover

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small shop workers will lose their jobs and suffer from issues

such

as poverty,

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then

it might lead to bigger problems,

for instance

, homelessness. One effective solution to deal with

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issue is

that

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government

and

population

support

.

That is

to say, the

government

and the

population

should

support

and help small

businesses

to develop furtherFor example, the

government

should cooperate with small

businesses

in several aspects,

such

as reducing taxes, which would these

businesses

, grow and succeed in the future. As for the

support

of the

population

, it will be in terms of appreciation and moral

support

. Showing appreciation to the owners of small

shops

when visiting their

shops

or interacting with them encourages them to continue. In conclusion,

,

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when small

businesses

or

shops

close,

this

damage will

also

affect society in many ways.

nevertheless

,

government

and

population

support

has an effective impact on solving

this

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problem

proble

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