The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
This
line graph data provides information about the mean of how much each person from United
Kingdom, Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal released Carbon Dioxide in
1967 to 2007.
United Kingdom ranked Change preposition
from
the
Correct article usage
apply
first
in 1967 with less than 11 metric tons
of CO2 emissions. From 1967 to 1977 it drop
only a tiny bit. Wrong verb form
dropped
Then
from 1977, it started to slowly decreasing
till 2007 Change the verb
decrease
where
it reached less than 9 metric Correct word choice
when
tons
and still ranked as the first
position of the highest country that emitted CO2.
In 1967, Sweden
showed a sharp increase from around 7 metric tons
to a little bit over 10 metric tons
in 1977. From there, they fell by approximately 3 metric tons
in 1987. Since then
, the trend started to decrease gradually till it reached around 5 metric tons
in 2007. That’s when Sweden
and Portugal meet
and ranked as the Wrong verb form
met
last
place
.
Over the 20 years
, Portugal, who’s
ranked at the Correct your spelling
who is
last
place
, have
a steady climb from over 1 metric Correct subject-verb agreement
has
tons
in 1967 to a little over 3 metric tons
. For the next 10 years
, it rises even quicker where it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
reaches
approximately 5 metric Wrong verb form
reaching
tons
. As for the last
10 years
, it increases
slightly.
As for Italy, it rises rapidly for the Wrong verb form
has increased
first
10 years
from around 1 metric ton to a little over 6. The next 20 years
, it keeps growing almost stable till it reaches less than 8 metric tons
. As for the last
10 years
it remains stable.
Add a comma
years,
United
Kingdom remains the Correct article usage
The United
first
place
from the beginning to the end, while
Portugal remains the last
place
from the entire graph. In 2007 Portugal meets
Wrong verb form
met
Sweden
where both of the countries ranked as
Change preposition
apply
last
place
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