The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

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line graph data provides information about the mean of how much each person from

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Kingdom,

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, Italy and Portugal released Carbon Dioxide

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1967 to 2007. United Kingdom ranked

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first

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in 1967 with less than 11 metric

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of CO2 emissions. From 1967 to 1977 it

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only a tiny bit.

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from 1977, it started to slowly

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till 2007

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it reached less than 9 metric

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and still ranked as the

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position of the highest country that emitted CO2. In 1967,

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showed a sharp increase from around 7 metric

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to a little bit over 10 metric

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in 1977. From there, they fell by approximately 3 metric

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in 1987. Since

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, the trend started to decrease gradually till it reached around 5 metric

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in 2007. That’s when

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and Portugal

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and ranked as the

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place

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. Over the 20

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, Portugal,

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ranked at the

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,

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a steady climb from over 1 metric

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in 1967 to a little over 3 metric

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. For the next 10

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, it rises even quicker where

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reaches

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approximately 5 metric

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. As for the

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10

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, it

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slightly. As for Italy, it rises rapidly for the

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10

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from around 1 metric ton to a little over 6. The next 20

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, it keeps growing almost stable till it reaches less than 8 metric

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. As for the

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10

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years

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it remains stable.

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Kingdom remains the

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place

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from the beginning to the end,

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Portugal remains the

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place

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from the entire graph. In 2007 Portugal

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Sweden

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where both of the countries ranked 

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