The chart below shows the average hours spent per day in leisure and sports activities by youngest and oldest populations in the US in 2015.
The chart compares the average
time
spent by the elderly and young generations in their spare time
and physical activities
daily in the US in 2015.
Overall
, it is evident that both generations spend most of their time
watching television. While
relaxing and thinking are the least activities
done by the younger generation
, the oldest generation
tend
to be less interested in sports Correct subject-verb agreement
tends
activities
.
The young people, 15-19 age group, spend nearly 2.5 hours in a day
to
watching television. Change preposition
apply
Following
this
, they spent around one hour per day
playing games. Then
, they are likely to communicate approximately for 45 minutes
and do some exercises for around half hour
Correct article usage
an hour
in
a Change preposition
apply
day
. Moreover
, they only read for about 10 minutes
and do relaxing activities
for around 5 minutes
daily.
On the other hand
, the older generation
, 75 years and older group, watch television nearly 4.5 hours per day
. Then
, they spend to read
for about one hour and Change the verb form
reading
sosialize
for around 40 Correct your spelling
socialize
minutes
in
a Change preposition
apply
day
. This
generation
has a similar average time
for relaxing and playing games, amounting to approximately thirty minutes
daily. As they age, they do less
physical Correct quantifier usage
fewer
activities
, such
as sports, spending only 10 minutes
in a day
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