The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart illustrates how usually
people
ate junk Use synonyms
food
in the United States in the range Use synonyms
years
2003 and 2013.
Use synonyms
Overall
, citizens of the USA in 2003 ate often more fast Linking Words
food
than others in two Use synonyms
years
with Use synonyms
average
percentage of 27. Correct article usage
an average
While
the percentage of residents in 2006 lead in 3 Linking Words
years
.
In all three Use synonyms
years
, Use synonyms
people
did not prefer to eat fast Use synonyms
food
every day. More precisely under 5%. Use synonyms
However
, approximately Linking Words
one
-third of Use synonyms
people
in three Use synonyms
years
were interested in eating unhealthy Use synonyms
food
at least Use synonyms
one
time in Use synonyms
one
week. With the same situation, residents ate junk Use synonyms
food
Use synonyms
one
or two times in Use synonyms
one
month. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
while
in 2006 Linking Words
this
situation was the lowest, the number of Linking Words
people
was Use synonyms
one
-fourth.
The Use synonyms
amount
of citizens, who ate Change the quantifier
number
same
Correct article usage
the same
food
a few times in Use synonyms
one
year was below or exactly 15% in 2003 and 2006,2013 respectively. The lowest percentage of Use synonyms
people
who did not Use synonyms
ate
fast Change the verb form
eat
food
was the same as Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
which
ate unhealthy Correct pronoun usage
who
food
every single day.Use synonyms
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