The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.

The maps below show changes in the city of Nelson in recent times.
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The maps represent the changes that Porth
Harbor
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has undergone from 2000 to the present day.
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, as we can see from the illustrations, the
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developed from a small fishing village into a tourist-oriented area. The most significant change is that the castle was replaced by a
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in the southeast part of the
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.
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, the number of docks increased from one to two. The marina was converted into an area for fishing boats to the west of the docks, leading to a noticeable increase in the number of boats in the
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. In the southern part of the
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, places for tourists,
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as cafes and shops, were built, offering activities for visitors. The construction of the
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brought other changes,
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as the building of a road leading to the
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and the public beach nearby being reserved exclusively for
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guests.
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, southwest of the fishing boats, more showers and toilets were constructed, and the entrance to the car park was changed from the west side to the south.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words harbor, hotel with synonyms.
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