The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use
The first pie chart compares different methods of
energy
usage in an average Australian household. The second pie chart compares the extent of the effects on greenhouse
gas
emissions
that result from these types of energy
.
Overall
, Australian inhabitants spend most of their energy
on heating, which is 21 times more than cooling, with minimal energy
usage. Furthermore
, the highest damage to greenhouse
gases is from the water heating process, and almost identical to other appliances.
The Australian household heating process constitutes 42 percent
of all methods, Change the spelling
per cent
while
the refrigeration working system accounts for one-sixth of its utilization. Fortunately, its impact on greenhouse
gas
emissions
is practically the same as refrigeration, which is almost 14.5 percent
. In second place is the water heating process, which uses double the amount of Change the spelling
per cent
energy
as other appliances and its influence on greenhouse
gas
emissions
is similar to its usage, which is nearly 30 percent
. There is extremely low energy
consumption for cooling and lighting processes, respectively 2 and 4 percent
, and Change the spelling
per cent
also
the lowest effect level on greenhouse
gas
emissions
, 3 and 8 percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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