The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.
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The line chart illustrates the
number
of visitors who travelled to a Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
number
of tourists has been increasing dramatically during
this
period and eventually reached its peak at 3.5
million
by 2017.
According to
the graph, in 2010, most individuals preferred to stay on the
island
than on cruise ships and
this
trend remained almost steady over time.
However
, in 2015, the two lines crossed each other at the point of nearly 1
million
.
Then
, the
number
of passengers on cruise ships rose significantly to 2
million
by 2017.
While
the
number
of tourists who wanted to stay on the
island
reached 1.5
million
.
Although
during these 8 years the
number
of individuals who wanted to see
this
tourist attraction grew significantly, the figure for ship applicants increased rapidly after 2012.
On the other hand
, the
number
of residents on the
island
fluctuated.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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