The graph shows the average Japanese month salary (Yen) from 1953 to 1983, and the prices of black and white televisions and color televisions during the same period.
The chart gives information on the average Japanese monthly income for individuals (
Yen
) from 1953 to 1983 and the prices of black and white televisions and the colour during the time.
Overall
, it seems that the monthly salary is increasing at a high rate eventually, and coloured TV
has gone down, and the same with Black and white TV
although
in a different number.
To begin
with, a monthly salary in 1953 was almost between 20 yen
and 40 yen
, and after that, it increased to exactly 40 yen
in 1958, and it showed more growth in the rate in 1963, reaching 60 yen
and eventually ending with 180 yen
in 1973. However
, the coloured TV
was the opposite, starting in 1958 at 180 yen
and decreasing after that, reaching 110 yen
in 1963 and, after five years, becoming 100 yen
and in 1973, it was 90 yen
.
Moreover
, The black and white TV
in 1953 was 100 yen
and went down to 80 in 1958 however
, in 1963, it reached the same number as the monthly salary, which was 60 yen
, from 1968 until 1973, decreasing to 40 yen
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