Write a letter to your friend and ask him recipe to cook for a party that you are giving in your home. -tell him why you are having a party -tell him why you need a specific recipe -invite your friend to the party

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Dear Navneet, I hope you and your family are doing splendidly.I am doing great too.It has been a long time since we caught up with each other.
Therefore
, I am writing
this
letter with great pleasure to invite you to a special party
also
for your helping hand.
To begin
with, next week I have a promotion party at my home as you know I have been working for
this
opportunity for so long and
as a result
of my hard work I got the promotion. After, I got a promotion letter from my workplace
then
I decided to organize a party because each of my friends and family members definitely deserved participation in my happiness. Apart from that, I need your help in the preparation of a special cuisine. Frankly, it is just a simple task, if you remember
last
month you prepared one panner tikka for our lunch,
similarly
, I want the recipe for the same dish because that was extremely delicious.
Besides
that, I would be absolutely thrilled if you could join me on my special day as you have been my best friend for the
last
8 years.
Although
, I know you are very punctual but still do not be late. I will share details of the location with you ASAP. Thank you in advance for the recipe
as well as
for accepting my invitation. Best regards Arshdeep
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coherence cohesion
Ensure to use consistent tense throughout your letter to make it more fluid and clear.
task achievement
The letter includes all the key points requested: explaining the reason for the party, asking for the recipe, and inviting the friend to the event.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a message to a close friend.
coherence cohesion
The paragraphs are well-organized and each new idea is clearly introduced.
coherence cohesion
The letter begins with a warm greeting and ends with a proper closing.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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