The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed

The table and charts below give informations on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed
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data about how much
money
the police had and spent on 3 various items between 2017 and 2018 in the UK.
Overall
, it was important that the number of
money
that was invested in salaries was reduced
while
technology climbed;
moreover
, the income increased and the main of them was for national governments
instead
of other sources.
According to
the diagram, national governments, the best element that had huge
money
, was 175.5 in 2017;
thereafter
, it was nearly 2 jumped. The second one was Local Taxes, which was roughly half of the prior in 2017;
then
it reached 102.3 in 2018. The
last
one was other sources, which did not see visible changes, and it was approximately 38. The graphs demonstrate the majority of
money
funded on salaries by 75% in 2017. Later
this
percentage
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% dipped in 2018. The part that was the same in both times was building and transport at 17%;
in contrast
, technology went up significantly from 8% to 14%.
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