The pictures of pie charts and table show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

The pictures of pie charts and table show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.
The bar charts and table compare data about how much money
people
who lived in a city in the UK earned and invested in a range of items at 2 various times( 2010, 2013).
Overall
, it was important that the number of costs that
people
spent climbed
while
their incomes were reduced;
moreover
, in both years
people
bought food that had vitamins a lot.
According to
the table, at the beginning,
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the populations
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populations
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who lived in a region of Bitainnia earned 29,000, but
this
amount of 4,000 declined the second time.
In contrast
, in 2013, communities spent 1,000 more than in the prior, which was 14,000. The graphs demonstrate that the proportion of things that
people
spent money on not only meat and fish but
also
fruits and vegetables , the main section of
people
's meals, were 29 and 26 per cent;
then
the others fell a tiny fraction;
however
, the second one improved slightly to reached 30%. The third sector which had the same percentage as two years at 18% was Other foods. Later Dairy products and Clothes roughly had the same figure;
furthermore
, in 2013, Dairy products 4% rose to
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16%;
nevertheless
, another 2% went down to hit 13%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average income
  • spending habits
  • proportion
  • cost of living
  • economic changes
  • cultural factors
  • standard of living
  • economic health
  • leftover income
  • savings
  • expenses
  • financial trends
  • value for money
  • economic forecasts
  • significant increase/decrease
  • spending patterns
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