The pictures of pie charts and table show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

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The bar charts and table compare data about how much money

people

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who lived in a city in the UK earned and invested in a range of items at 2 various times( 2010, 2013).

Overall

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, it was important that the number of costs that

people

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spent climbed

while

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their incomes were reduced;

moreover

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, in both years

people

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bought food that had vitamins a lot.

According to

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the table, at the beginning,

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the populations

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populations

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population

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who lived in a region of Bitainnia earned 29,000, but

this

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amount of 4,000 declined the second time.

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, in 2013, communities spent 1,000 more than in the prior, which was 14,000. The graphs demonstrate that the proportion of things that

people

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spent money on not only meat and fish but

also

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fruits and vegetables , the main section of

people

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's meals, were 29 and 26 per cent;

then

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the others fell a tiny fraction;

however

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, the second one improved slightly to reached 30%. The third sector which had the same percentage as two years at 18% was Other foods. Later Dairy products and Clothes roughly had the same figure;

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, in 2013, Dairy products 4% rose to

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16%;

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, another 2% went down to hit 13%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

201 words

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average income
spending habits
proportion
cost of living
economic changes
cultural factors
standard of living
economic health
leftover income
savings
expenses
financial trends
value for money
economic forecasts
significant increase/decrease
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The pictures of pie charts and table show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

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