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Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my satisfaction with your hotel food and service which
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 received yesterday at my friend's birthday party.
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, me and friends are satisfied with the food that you served
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 night, especially, the meat was very delicious and fresh.
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, the customer service provided by the waiters was compelling, and each member of the staff was respectful and professional. In spite of
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 atmosphere of the restaurant was exciting and delightful as we enjoyed the dancing floor till midnight. One of the most fascinating things was that we enjoyed every single moment of the party without any disturbance.
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, the entire experience was great, I would be grateful if you provided me with more options for the drinks and snacks
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 as you would add some Western wines to your inventory in order to get more positive feedback. Thanks for your time and consideration. Regards, Ankit Kumar

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Organizational Advice
Consider organizing the content to enhance logical flow, such as by dedicating individual paragraphs to different topics (e.g., food, atmosphere, suggestions).
Language Advice
Ensure all sentences fully convey the intended meaning with correct grammar and vocabulary. Small grammatical improvements can help.
Content Highlight
Expresses satisfaction and appreciation effectively.
Tone Highlight
Polite and formal tone is maintained throughout the letter, which is appropriate for a restaurant feedback letter.
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