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The diagram illustrates the

process

and

equipment's

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used in making

cement

and how

cement

is used to produce concrete. There are 5

equipment's

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used and

also

5 stages in the

cement making

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process

. In the concrete making

process

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there are 2

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equipments

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equipment

used and

also

2 stages in the

process

of making concrete.

Firstly

, in the

cement

production

process

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the

equipments

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used are the crusher,

mixer

, rotating heater, grinder, and bags. the first of six stages

on

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making

cement

is the crushing

process

, where

limestones

and

clays

are crushed using the crusher

machine

. The second

stage

is the mixing

process

, where the crushed

limestones

and

clays

are mixed using the

mixer

.

Thirdly

, the mixed

limestones

and

clays

are rotated and heated using the rotating heater

machine

. The fourth

stage

is the grinding

stage

, in

this

stage

the

limestones

and

clays

are grinded by the grinder

machine

. In the

last

stage

, the

limestones

and

clays

that

has

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turned into

cement

are put in bags. After the

cement

is made, concrete can be made, the

equipment's

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used to make concrete are a grovel and a concrete

mixer

. In the first of the two

process

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of producing concrete, water and sand are poured into a gravel and the

cement

is poured straight into the concrete

mixer

. In the second and

last

stage

the sand,

cement

, and water are mixed using the concrete

mixer

machine

. In conclusion, the

cement

and

concrete making

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process

are

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quite simple.