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used in making

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and how

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is used to produce concrete. There are 5

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. In the concrete making

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there are 2

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of making concrete.

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used are the crusher,

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, rotating heater, grinder, and bags. the first of six stages

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making

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is the crushing

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, where

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are crushed using the crusher

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. The second

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is the mixing

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, where the crushed

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are mixed using the

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are rotated and heated using the rotating heater

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is the grinding

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the

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are grinded by the grinder

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that

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turned into

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are put in bags. After the

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is made, concrete can be made, the

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used to make concrete are a grovel and a concrete

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of producing concrete, water and sand are poured into a gravel and the

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is poured straight into the concrete

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the sand,

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, and water are mixed using the concrete

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. In conclusion, the

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quite simple.