The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart depicts the shift in the
production
of several items such
as suits, dresses and coats in the apparel industry between 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, in two decades suits had an inflated production
, during the same time dress manufacturing had a gradual push towards growth. Meanwhile, the graph illustrates the significant growth of the coat.
To begin
with, in 1990 coat production
was shown at around seven million
with the least making apparel, however
in 2005 it was noted with rapidly grown cloth with the increment of nearly 16 million
, moreover
till 2010 it was soared by two million
and stood with 25 million
, therefore
ageing the 1st position in clothing industry respectively.
In addition
, the suit had a jump of close to 9 million
productions from 1990 to 1995, suddenly after that, it fell sharply till 2005 with roughly 8 million
and last
, in 2010 it stood by more or less than 19 million
. Lastly
, dress manufacturing had a steady rise of almost 3 million
in the early half decade, furthermore
in 2000 it was noted with a slight decline an about 2 million
. Moreover
, till 2010 dress production
had a considerable push and went up by 4 million
(15 million
).Submitted by tushalk329 on
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