The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts depict the generation of
electricity
in Germany
compared to France
from all renewables and sources in 2009. It is measured in billion kWh. Overall
, there are some differences between the two countries.
Firstly
, Germany
generated the most electricity
by conventional thermal at 59.6 per cent
. Followed by nuclear at 23 per cent
and 17.4 per cent
Renewables including Biomass at 39.3 per cent
, Wind power at 36.9 per cent
, Hydroelectric at 17.7 per cent
and also
Solar at 6.1 per cent
consecutively.
However
, The generation of electricity
in France
was different from Germany
. The first-ranked of France
's electricity
source is Nuclear at 76 per cent
, which is one-third of all sources. Followed by Renewable at 13.7 per cent
, which includes Hydroelectric at 80.5 per cent
, Wind at 10.5 per cent
, Biomass at 8.1 per cent
and Solar at just 0.9 per cent
, which is the lowest figure. The last
-ranked is Conventional Thermal at 10.3 per cent
.
Meanwhile, the electricity
generation of Germany
and France
have the same trend. The electricity
generated by Geothermal was not popular in both two countries. The given information depicts the number of Geothermal at 0.0 per cent
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