The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
The graph illustrates
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
shops
that have been shut down and started in a country over the period of seven years
from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it is obvious that starting new shops
were
significantly declined Unnecessary verb
apply
while
closure
of Add an article
the closure
stores
slightly decreased with a sharp drop over the years
.
According to
the information given, approximately 6,500 shops
were closed in 2011 and it reached to
roughly 7,100 after two Change preposition
apply
years
. In 2015, number
of closed Change the article
the number
shops
were
sharply decreased by about 500 Unnecessary verb
apply
shops
. However
, next year 5,100 stores
were shut down which is ten times more compared to previous
year. Add an article
the previous
Then
, it remained steady until 2018 when about 5,200 stopped to serve for customers.
By contrast
, around 8,500 new shops
were opened in in
2011 which was Change preposition
apply
peak
for Add an article
the peak
a peak
next
seven Correct article usage
the next
years
. After a year, amount of new
opened Change the adjective
newly
stores
went down significantly by only 4,000 new shops
were started. Number
of Change the article
A number
The number
opening
new Verb problem
apply
stores
saw its secon
peak in 2014 when 6,100 Correct your spelling
second
shops
were opened and steadily declined until 2018 by
Change preposition
with
opening
of only 3,000 new Add an article
the opening
stores
.Submitted by abdulboriysog17 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, years, stores with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
▼