The charts below show the amount of financial aid that four nations received and how the money was spent in 1974 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams depict
the
information about financial aid from four Correct article usage
apply
countires
and the Correct your spelling
countries
counties
spent
of its in 1974 and 2014, Replace the word
spending
categoried
by Correct your spelling
categorised
categorized
facility
.
Add an article
the facility
Overall
, the amount
of financial aid of
every Change preposition
in
nations
experienced a significant reduction in 2014 compared with 1974, especially Change to a singular noun
nation
Chain
which had to Correct your spelling
China
be
the second in Unnecessary verb
apply
term
of Fix the agreement mistake
terms
amount
in 1974. Notably, catering had the most draw down
compared to Correct your spelling
drawdown
other type
.
In 1974, The monetary support in South Africa Change the wording
another type
other types
had
more than 65 Verb problem
was
million
which is the highest amount
throughout the period, followed by China with 62 million
. Althrough
, Indonesia and Thailand only Correct your spelling
Although
accouted
for third and Correct your spelling
accounted
forth
place in, Correct your spelling
fourth
figured
55 and 48 Wrong verb form
figures
million
, respectively. In 2014, China
financial aid had plummeted to 6 Change noun form
China's
million
which is the lowest amount
througout
the period.
Meanwhile, monetary support distribution in financial and medicine experienced insignificant draw down Correct your spelling
throughout
about
5 and 20 Change preposition
of about
million
, respectively. Catering experienced a massive decreased
Replace the word
decrease
more
than 55 Change preposition
of more
million
from 70 million
to just 15 million
in 40 years
time.Change noun form
years'
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