The pictures of pie charts and table show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

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The graph and the table provide information about the average salary and the spending of money on food and clothes by an average family in a city in Britain from 2010 to 2013.

Overall

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, the salary decreased, but the spending shows an increase

However

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, the percentages on the table do not show a huge difference in rate for both the two years.

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with, the income was 29000 in 2010 and went down to 25000 in 2013, which decreased by 4000, the spending on food and clothes was 14000 in 2010 and went up to 15000 in 2013.

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, the percentages of spending on stuff give similar rates in both years, starting with fruits and vegetables, which in 2010 was 26% and increased to 30% in 2013, and

this

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led to meat and fish in 2010 was 29% and decreased by 6% to become 23%, dairy products show increasing in 2010 was 12% and became 16% in 2013, after that the other kinds of food which stayed the same in rate. Eventually, clothes in 2010 were 15% and went down a little to 13% in 2013.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average income
spending habits
proportion
cost of living
economic changes
cultural factors
standard of living
economic health
leftover income
savings
expenses
financial trends
value for money
economic forecasts
significant increase/decrease
spending patterns

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The pictures of pie charts and table show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

Some people think that the government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others argue it is the responsibility of each individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern society, it is no longer necessary to slaughter animals for producing food, or non-food products such as clothes or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

Technology has caused the death of traditional skills and ways of life. It is pointless to ensure their survival. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that climate has the greatest affect on people's way of life. Others believe that the economy of a region has the greatest effect. This is both the views and give your opinion.