The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart gives the
rate
of individuals taking in 4 different types of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005.
Overall
, one
kind of sport was increasing and one
was the opposite in the rate
and the two rest stayed the same in number.
Begin with one
that was increasing which is tennis, in 1985 was 150 and after 5 years went up a little to become almost 180, in more 5 years reached 200 in 1995 and eventually 220 in 2005, rugby was the opposite in rate
and was decreasing, in 1985 was 250 and went down to 200 in 1990, from 1990 to 1995 almost stayed the same and after that decreased to become150 in 2000, from this
time to 2005 went down significantly to reach 50.
Moreover
, badminton and basketball were Constant in the rate
, However
, basketball was a little higher in number, starting in 1985 badminton was 50 and basketball was 70 in 2005 every one
of them was the same in number.Submitted by ahmedaziz9811 on
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