The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
amount
of travellers who visited Caribbean island
, over a Fix the agreement mistake
islands
7 year
period from 2010 to 2017. Add a hyphen
7-year
Overall
, the number of Carribean
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Caribbean
visitors
who stayed on cruise ships witnessed a dramatic increased
in the Replace the word
increase
last
5 years although
there was a slight fall from 2011 to 2012. Another interesting part is that visitors
who stayed on island
had the highest Add an article
the island
amount
in 2010 but there were more people who preferred staying on cruise ships in 2017.
In 2010, the amount
of tourists who stayed on cruise ships started at 250 thousand and it gradually went up to 500 thousand in 2011. Although
the number bounced back to the same amount
as 2010, it rose sharply from 2012 onwards, picking up 2 million
of
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visitors
in 2017.
By contrast
, the number of travellers who stayed on Caribbean island
fluctuated significantly over the period. From 2010 to 2011, it remained stable at 750 thousand and Fix the agreement mistake
islands
then
grew to 1.5 million
in 2013. However
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
visitors
declined to 1.25 million
in 2016 and levelled off at 1.5 million
in 2017.Submitted by yw_lh on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 4 times.
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