The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays how many visitors paid a visit to Caribbean
island
over an eight year
period from 2010 to 2017.
Add a hyphen
eight-year
Overall
, the total number
of travellers who visited the island
grew steadily almost every year. In addition
, more visitors stayed on cruise ships than on the island
in 2017.
It was clear that the total number
of arrivals on the island
increased gradually from 1 million
in 2010 to approximately 2.75 million
in 2015. It then
remained stable in 2016 before rocketing to 3.5 million
in 2017.
There was a period of stability around 0.75 million
between 2010 and 2011 which fell on the volume of visitors who stayed on the island
. It then
rose consistently before reaching a plateau of 1.5 million
which lasted from 2013 to 2017 apart from a small dip in 2016.
There were far fewer tourists staying on cruise ships in 2010, at only about 0.25 million
. After some fluctuations in the next 2 years, the number
started rising steadily. In 2016, it overtaken
the Add the auxiliary verb
overtook
has overtaken
number
of those who stayed on the island
around 0.25 million
, until it climbed up to 2 million
in 2017.Submitted by yw_lh on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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