You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided graph illustrates the amount of
exports
which Australia made to 4 countries in 22 years
period
from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
,
the
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exports
to China increased significantly and
exports
to Japan decreased over the years. The
exports
made to China started
with
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just around 1% in 1990,
this
number
continued growing and reached about 10% in 2005. The
exports
increased drastically until the end of the
period
with just above a quarter.
In contrast
,
exports
to Japan began with the highest
number
of
exports
which was a little more than a quarter.
This
number
continued dropping and reached
to
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roughly 17% by 2012.
Exports
to
US
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and India fluctuated during the
period
. India had a similar starting
number
with
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China. It remained steady until 2000. Over the next ten years, there was an upward trend.
However
, it declined to only 5% by 2012.
Lastly
, the US had the second highest
exports
at the beginning with 12% of
exports
, but it fluctuated and reached only 7%
at the end
of the
period
.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, period, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • percentage
  • fluctuate
  • steady increase/decrease
  • notable rise/drop
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • export destinations
  • trade relations
  • upsurge
  • downturn
  • economic ties
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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