You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.
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The provided graph illustrates the amount of
exports
which Australia made to 4 countries in 22 years period
from 1990 to 2012. Overall
, the
Correct article usage
apply
exports
to China increased significantly and exports
to Japan decreased over the years.
The exports
made to China started with
just around 1% in 1990, Change preposition
at
this
number
continued growing and reached about 10% in 2005. The exports
increased drastically until the end of the period
with just above a quarter. In contrast
, exports
to Japan began with the highest number
of exports
which was a little more than a quarter. This
number
continued dropping and reached to
roughly 17% by 2012.
Change preposition
apply
Exports
to US
and India fluctuated during the Correct article usage
the US
period
. India had a similar starting number
with
China. It remained steady until 2000. Over the next ten years, there was an upward trend. Change preposition
to
However
, it declined to only 5% by 2012. Lastly
, the US had the second highest exports
at the beginning with 12% of exports
, but it fluctuated and reached only 7% at the end
of the period
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, period, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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