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In the future, all cars,buses and trucks will be driver less.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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The
devolpment
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development
 and
innoviation
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innovation
innovations
 in technologies trend to replace all manual and automatic
cars
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,buses, and trucks
to
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 autonomous
vehicles
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 in the future. In my
opinion
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 I strongly encourage the nation for the reason that will decrease the
numbers
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number
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 of
accident
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accidents
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 and
more
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 convenient . To
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driveless
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vehicles
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 will help in reducing the
numbers
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number
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 of car
accident
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.
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, the road congestion and traffic can be solved with autonomous
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.
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, many
people
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 are exposed a stressful
situation
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situations
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 and they are exhausted
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this
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 reason they are unable to drive well and save.
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, nowadays we have many distractions that can highly affect the driver to keeping
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focus
focused
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driveless
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driverless
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 car will improve the quality of driving and
insure
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ensure
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humans
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human
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savety
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safety
.
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, replacing
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traditionaly
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traditional
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vehicles
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autonoums
cars
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 will
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 a significant impact on
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people
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people's
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time
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 management and it more comfortable
to
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humuns
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humans
.
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,
people
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spent
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 many hours in their
cars
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 driving
while
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 they can
use
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this
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time
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 doing
others
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 tasks .
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, it
more
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to
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sociaty
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society
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driveless
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cars
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 in order to
got
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go
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 to their offices or
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schools
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, especially
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 in congestion . A recent study
proving
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 that if we
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driveless
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vehciles
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vehicles
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use
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 in country
devolpment
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development
. In conclusion, In future
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all
vehcile
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vehicle
vehicles
 will
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be driven
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 less and
people
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 will be just
a passengers
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a passenger
passengers
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. I
belive
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believe
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 that it will help to limit
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cars accident
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car accidents
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 and save
people
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time
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 with
comfortable
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a comfortable
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 experience.
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task response
Ensure that your essay fully addresses all parts of the task. Consider discussing potential disadvantages as well in order to create a more comprehensive argument.
task response
Provide more specific examples and evidence to back up your points. This will make your arguments more convincing.
coherence cohesion
Work on organizing your essay more clearly. Ensure each paragraph has a clear main point and flows logically to the next.
coherence cohesion
Improve the transitions between your paragraphs to make the essay more cohesive.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are clearly presented, providing a good structure for your essay.
task response
You have made a good attempt to cover the topic and presented several arguments in favor of driverless vehicles.
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