The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as poor people become poorer and rich people become richer. What problems could this situations cause? what are the solutions to address those problems?

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between poor
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and rich
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is growing
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and
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either they become poorer or wealthier. In my perspective,
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leads to problems
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as increased dissatisfaction and crime in society,
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abnormal
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that is
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caused by
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the
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can establish a balance to some extent by regulating taxation and providing free educational
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On the one hand, the growing
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between different classes can lead to an increase in criminal
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and dissatisfaction among the
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.
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is because it can create a sense of inequality and injustice among those who are less fortunate.
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economic inequality can lead to social unrest and resentment, which in turn can contribute to increased criminality. One example can be seen in the United States, where the
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gap
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has been increasing for decades. The growing divide between the wealthy and the poor has led to higher crime rates in low-income areas, as
people
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turn to illicit activities to survive.
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, the
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can alleviate these challenges by setting progressive taxation, which involves higher taxes on the wealthy.
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, the specific rates for these taxes can vary depending on the individual's income and assets. Perhaps the
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can, to an extent, create a balance in society.
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, the disparity in
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and
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can lead to
lack
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social facilities for poor
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. When
people
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feel that their needs and aspirations are not being met, they may become disillusioned and frustrated, which can result in jobless and
illiteracy
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lack of respect for the law and
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illegal
behavior
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, the manner
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lack of
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education
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.
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is enslaving them day after day.
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, they can be poorer than past.
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, Brazil has a significant
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between the rich and the poor, with the wealthiest 1% owning more than 100 times the
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of the bottom 50%.
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disparity has led to widespread frustration and discontent among the Brazilian population, particularly among the lower and middle classes who struggle with high levels of poverty, unemployment, and limited
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for social advancement.
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, the
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by redistribution of
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through social welfare programs,
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and policies
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that promote equal access to education, healthcare, and job
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can help to address the root causes of economic inequality, reducing poverty and increasing social mobility. In conclusion,
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the
gap
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between the rich and the poor is increasing and leading to problems
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as dissatisfaction
illiteracy
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and crime, I believe that the
government
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can address these issues to some extent through policies
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as taxes and providing free social and educational services.
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can help to reduce the
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in
wealth
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and create more equal
opportunities
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for all citizens.
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