The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
followers
of 5 popular Instagram influencers,namely Cristiano Ronaldo
, the Rock
, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and Selena
Gomez
in 2 different years, particularly in 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, the popularity of the famous increased sharply during the period of time. Moreover
, although
Selena
Gomez
was the most famous in 2018, Christiano Ronaldo
managed to outperform her, as a result
, he was the most well-known influencer in 2021. In addition
, Ronaldo
's followers
quantity was the maximum among all of them in both years.
The Change to a genitive case
follower's
followers'
Rock
and Kylie Jenner had fewer followers
in 2018, also
their figure was nearly the same, 95 million
and 100 million
respectively. However
, while
the Rock
had the lowest position in 2018, Selena
Gomez
peaked having approximately 125 million
.
In 2021 The Rock
, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner had similar
number of Change the article
a similar
the similar
followers
of 250 million
, while
Selena
Gomez
's followers
were below 250 followers
, despite having the best results in 2018. Christiano Ronaldo
gained more popularity, so he had about 310 million
followers
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