The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and

2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The bar chart illustrates the number of
followers
of 5 popular Instagram influencers,namely Cristiano
Ronaldo
, the
Rock
, Ariana Grande, Kylie Jenner and
Selena
Gomez
in 2 different years, particularly in 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, the popularity of the famous increased sharply during the period of time.
Moreover
,
although
Selena
Gomez
was the most famous in 2018, Christiano
Ronaldo
managed to outperform her,
as a result
, he was the most well-known influencer in 2021.
In addition
,
Ronaldo
's
followers
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quantity was the maximum among all of them in both years. The
Rock
and Kylie Jenner had fewer
followers
in 2018,
also
their figure was nearly the same, 95
million
and 100
million
respectively.
However
,
while
the
Rock
had the lowest position in 2018,
Selena
Gomez
peaked having approximately 125
million
. In 2021 The
Rock
, Ariana Grande and Kylie Jenner had
similar
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the similar
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number of
followers
of 250
million
,
while
Selena
Gomez
's
followers
were below 250
followers
, despite having the best results in 2018. Christiano
Ronaldo
gained more popularity, so he had about 310
million
followers
.
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