In some countries, many parents teach their kids that everything can be achieved if they work try enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, many parents teach their kids that everything can be achieved if they work try enough. In

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the positive and negative consequences will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

To begin

with, there are many advantages

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this

message. A

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and hardworking personality are the main key benefits, as they can serve as a growth mindset for individual development in both career and personal life.

For example

, if children

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to get a higher score,

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mindset could help them

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by themselves, resulting in higher

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in school.

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, in their future life, reaching a higher

salaries

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position in their workplace

require

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a lot of

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and effort which could be

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if they can learn

this

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age. Another benefit is self-rewarding, achieving

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by putting

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effort offers

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, leading to a positive learning process for children and becoming a valuable lesson.

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the other hand, there are some negative consequences associated with

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notion, teaching offspring that anything can be owned or achieved without proper guidance can be harmful

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themselves

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because many things cannot be afforded by just trying hard.

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, some luxury

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can be a dream item for

low income

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family

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without realizing a reality or

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situation will bring some disappointment, leading to serious

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health like low-self esteem and depression and even

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financial failure

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spending money on unnecessary

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. In conclusion,

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teaching message from parents provides several advantages for their children

such

as

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, growth mindset, hardworking personality and self-rewarding.

However

,

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can bring some drawbacks including misleading, low self-esteem and depression.

Therefore

, parents should take

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responsibility

for proper guidance to minimize the side effects.