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The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
#inquiries #tourist #information #office #city #period
‏ The data illustrates the figure of inquiries
had
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that had
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 been asked to
tourist
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the tourist
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 information office from
January
 to
June
 span in 2011.
Overall
, in
January
in
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apply
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person inquiries
was
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were
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 the lowest in all three ways,
moreover
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moreover,
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 it's significantly rose to be the highest in
June
, the period from
march
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March
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 to
June
 was full of fluctuation.
However
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However,
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 people
send
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sending
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 letters/
email
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emails
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 to
inquiry
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inquiries
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 became the lowest way in
June
.
In person
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In-person
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 and
by telephone
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by-telephone
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 inquiries all increased speedily by months,
in person
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in-person
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 inquiry was just over 400 in
January
 and by the months it dramatically increased to be the highest with approximately 1900, bye telephone inquiry was that 1st of the three in
January
 and it upsurged hurriedly to be the 2nd in
June
 with around 1600. Whilst, by letter/email
inquirty
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inquiry
 was just below 800 in
January
 but suddenly it decreased to be just below 400 in
June
 and
that's make
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that makes
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 it the lowest in general.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words january, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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