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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Technological equipment is constantly developing, and the reason for
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 letter is that it can change the conservative ideas of civilized countries. I completely agree that
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 are no longer necessary and I will address
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 briefly. In modern life, the Internet has rapidly become popular, connecting everyone and every country.
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, it provides a fast, accurate, and secure connection. It is true that before the invention of electronic postal systems,
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 were used to convey messages.
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 , in our digital age we can send emails in 30 seconds, contracts take at least 2 days to send
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.
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, we used to have a tradition of sending a holiday card to family, but taking into account how much time it would take for it to arrive. Recently, we can choose a digital card to give to our relatives without having to clean it at any time.
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, if these
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 contain secret data or information about a company or government,
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 they are not safe.
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, other issues may arise
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 translation into national languages. For these reasons, these
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 remain behind us like memories. At the same time, only romantic people will write
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 for personal reasons. Thanks to a letter, they organize a special meeting with their lovers. Still, many people in the past and even now prefer to chat face-to-face as usual.
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 to say, not only
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 purposes but
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 the writing of personal
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 became obsolete and useless.
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, Internet technology has replaced handwritten
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 with its advantages of speed, security, and delivery confirmation. Writing
letters
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 has become a beautiful social memory. I strongly agree that email is more convenient for civilized people.
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The writing tone is appropriate and maintains formality.
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Each paragraph generally sticks to one main idea, which enhances understanding.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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