The maps below show a beachfront area in Australia in 1950 and today Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams illustrate the transformation of a conference hall in 1950 and
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nowadays
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, the beachfront was
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buildings
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changes with the most noticeable being the replacement of the route has been changed and new structures added.
In 1950, the beachfront was simpler and less developed, with a playground, dining tables, a pavilion, a car park, a 25-meter pool, and a lighthouse. the structures were spread out with ample space.
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In contrast
, today beachfront has seen significant development and modernization. Notably, the 25-meter pool remains in place, but a larger 50-meter pool has been added. The playground has been removed, and a surf club, new car pack and restaurant have been built in its place. The dining tables, pavilion, and lighthouse remain in similar locations. Additionally
, the road leading from the city now loops around, connecting two car parks, possibly to accommodate more visitors.Submitted by nguyenhoanganhquan918 on
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