The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future.

The chart below gives information about the growth of urban population in certain parts of the world including the prediction of the future.
The bar chart displays the increase in population in the three different continents and the rest of the world in three years with predictions
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the future.
Overall
, the indexes of all areas have a trend of rising. Latin America has the best growth indicator than other graphs. As seen in the illustration, Latin America had nearly 40% in 1950,
while
others had, at maximum, almost 30%. In
this
year, Africa and Asia had almost the same percentages, with 10% and 13%, respectively. With a perfect index in 2000, the percentage of Latins had reached approximately 70%, and
this
result hadn't reached anyone in any year. The whole world had less than 50%,
while
Africa and Asia both had 40%. The biggest result will be in 2030 in Latin America, with roughly 80%. The whole world will have 60%, which is the second-best result. Africa and Asia will have the two lowest results, both approximately one
second,
respectively.
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