A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions about how to care for your pet • describe other household duties Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...
Dear Abdul,
How are you doing? hope all is well
?
Thank you for agreeing to take care of my lovely Cat Change the punctuation
.
whiles
Replace the word
while
i
am away. Change the capitalization
I
Incase
you need to contact me, Correct your spelling
In case
i
am lodged at Raddison Blu Change the capitalization
I
hotel freetown
. Correct your spelling
Hotel Freetown
However
incase
of Correct your spelling
in case
emergency
you can call me directly on Correct article usage
an emergency
mobile
phone Correct pronoun usage
my mobile
78134142
, Change preposition
on 78134142
as well as
the veterinarian doctor
contact card is Change noun form
doctor's
also
on the table beside the television in the living room.
The Cat should be fed twice daily at 8:00am and 5:00pm, you can find his foods
and eating bowls in the bottom drawer in the kitchen.Fix the agreement mistake
food
Also
ensure he drinks enough water throughout the day.
I would like you to Add a comma
Also,
also
water my garden every morning particularly
the backyard garden. Add the comma(s)
, particularly
Also
ensure to switch off the water pumping machine after usage.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Warmest regards,
RokeebAdd a comma
Also,
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general
Make sure to proofread your text for small grammatical errors and typos. For example, 'whiles' should be 'while', and 'incase' should be 'in case'.
coherence cohesion
Try to use a more varied sentence structure to enhance readability. For example, instead of stringing multiple instructions together, you could break them into shorter sentences or use bullet points.
task achievement
You have provided all the necessary contact details for emergencies and mentioned how to reach both you and the veterinarian. This is very clear and helpful.
task achievement
The tone of your letter is warm and friendly, which is very appropriate for a letter to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite