The graph shows average annual percentages of online adults who use different social networks. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the mean average of online adults using different social networks annually.
Firstly
, the average of people using not sites is approximately the same in both years while
the one-sight users
reached their peak in 2014 but fell short in 2015 by 8%. Moreover
, two
sites were used by almost the same amount of adults.
Correct article usage
the two
Secondly
, the graph then
shows a uniform decline with three site users
12%and 16%, four site users
at 5% and 8% and five site users
at 2% and 4% in 2014 than in year 2015. Overall
the graph portrays a downward trend with some fluctuations reaching its peak of 36% in 2014 and the low point of 2% in 2014.Submitted by irsamahmood on
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