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The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.
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The table describes crop yields from 2010 to 2020 and
also
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 predicts for 2025 and 2030. Overview, all kinds of grain production have increased from 2010 to 2030.
According to
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 the report, wheat, of all categories, took up the largest yields on average. In 2010, there were 100
million
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tons
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 and the number constantly rose up to 105
million
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tons
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 (2015), and 107
million
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tons
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 (2020) every five years.
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, it is predicted that the output will grow for the next ten years. Concerning the yields of rice, it accounted for the smallest figure among other crops. It has risen up since 2010.
First,
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the statistic was 24.7
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tons
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 and
then
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 rice production became a little larger with an amount of 24.3
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tons
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.
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, it is projected the total amount will climb up slightly to 25 (2025) and 25.5 (2030). In the case of barley,
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, the output presented a positive trend. In the beginning, 50
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tons
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 were generated and
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, more and more barley was produced with 70
million
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tons
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 in 2015, and 80 in 2020. What is more, there will be a continuous increase of difference by 10
million
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tons
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 between 2025 and 2030.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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