The graph below shows the average number of movies seen in a theater per year, by age group. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the average number of movies seen in a theater per year, by age group. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph compares the mean number of

films

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casted

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cast

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in a film hall each year,

according to

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3 age groups.

Overall

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it is clear that

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movies for both mid-

adults

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(25-44) and mature

adults

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(45-65) declined heavily

whereas

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films

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for young

adults

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(18-24) grew rapidly. In the year 2000, 15 movies were released for people

belonging

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aged

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45-65, which was the most popular.

On the other hand

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, in the same

year

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year,

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films

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for young

adults

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was

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were

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the least, recording

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apply

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10.

Also

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, there were 12

films

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for mid-

adults

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. In the next 5 years,

films

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for above 25 years followed a downtrend but

films

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for young

adults

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followed an uptrend and it surpassed the 25-44 age group. Thereby, movies for both mid and mature

adults

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drastically minimized and reached a value of below 8 and 5, respectively in 2015.

However

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films

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for young

adults

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remained at 12.

Similarly

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, amount of shows

casted

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cast

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more mature

adults

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were

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was

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12. And by 2015, shows for young

adults

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inclined to 14.

Witharana Senesh Rasinda WickramasingheMon Sep 23 2024

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words films, adults with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

age group
average number
theater
per year
trends
noticeable
fluctuations
significant differences
similarities
patterns
younger
older
respectively
period
shown in the graph

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