The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.
The given chart illustrates the differences in
proportion
of Add an article
the proportion
ownerships
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ownership
with
cars in Change preposition
of
one
of the countries in Europe between 1971 and 2001.
Generally speaking, the use of transports
was rising over decades, and several trends were found in figures among those owning Fix the agreement mistake
transport
one
or two cars, however
by the end of the period they both approached the same level.
To commence, in 1971 individuals with no cars made up about half of the population, locating
in close proximity to 50%. Wrong verb form
located
Nonetheless
, passing through decades
Correct article usage
the decades
this
percentage declined to 30%, which means the amount of drivers has expanded.
According to
the statistics of ownerships
, the amount of Fix the agreement mistake
ownership
one
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one-car
car
drivers was slowly falling, however
in 2001 it experienced a significant increase, resulting Add a comma
however,
approximately
45%. In comparison, two Change preposition
in approximately
car
owners raised and dropped in turn during years, being less than one
car
owners
, except in 1991. Fix the agreement mistake
owner
However
, in 2001 its percentage reached at
31%, making a tiny porch with Change preposition
apply
one
car
owners
.Fix the agreement mistake
owner
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Vocabulary: Replace the words one, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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