WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the information about a US bus company between 1999 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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pie chart gives information regarding USA bus company between 1999 and 2003 within 2 categories. These are ‘Actual and Target’.
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, when we look at the panel Actual and Target had 80% in 1999. After that Actual had 30% in 2000. Actual and Target’s ratio decreased. Linking Words
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the same in 2001 and 2002. Linking Words
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, Actual had 70% in 2003 and Target had 30% in 2003. Linking Words
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, Target is still low. Taking everything into account the highest were in 2003 and 2002. Later on, the lowest was in 1999. In 2003 the highest rate was 20%.
All in all, the diagram which is above mentioned describes the performance of the bus arriving on time. From my point of in 2000, 2001 and 2002 the rates did not decrease.Linking Words
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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