Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
At present, few individuals argue that
waste
material released from homes, a sufficient amount of waste
is not recycled, and the government
should bring up laws to
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for
this
problematic reason. Personally, I think the government
cannot fully involve
in Wrong verb form
involved
this
process and reasons will be outlined.
Firstly
, if government
implemented strict rules towards poor recycling, Add an article
the government
people
will
be more Wrong verb form
would
considered
and concerned Replace the word
considerate
on
their habits, Change preposition
about
regular
usage of materials. Correct word choice
and regular
For example
, the United States have
introduced a new tax for not recycling the amount of garbage released. Change the verb form
has
Therefore
, people
re-use the
items Correct article usage
apply
such
as bags and plastic bottles, and they collect the rubbish based on its materials (plastic, glass, paper). Moreover
, the housewives collect & gather the kitchen waste
and use as
compost/fertilizers to plant. So, the United States is the perfect mimic Correct pronoun usage
it as
to
other countries and proved how far Change preposition
of
government
laws could change people
.
On the other hand
, a proper education of the consequent results of improper waste
disposal is also
equally important. For instance
, educating...
If an increased number of social programs are introduced explaining possible outcomes like global warming, climate change, imbalance of ecosystems, etc., people
are
informed, and Wrong verb form
will be
people
will realize the reality and foster recycling. Furthermore
, introducing discounts, cash prizes, and gifts for people
who minimize waste
production. For instance
, providing yearly tax reduction
for Fix the agreement mistake
reductions
people
following the proper waste
control schemes and offering family trips to Sri Lanka. This
method of promotion encourages individuals to follow a proper waste
control scheme.
In conclusion, even though government
laws can make people
recycle and re-use
the items, Correct your spelling
reuse
however
, considering offering information to people
of the consequences of improper garbage disposal and rewards will definitely help toward this
situation.Submitted by Witharana Senesh Rasinda Wickramasinghe on
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task achievement
You provide relevant examples, such as the United States' tax on non-recycled garbage.
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