Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
At present, few individuals argue that
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waste
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to
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this
process and reasons will be outlined.
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government
implemented strict rules towards poor recycling, Add an article
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about
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For example
, the United States Linking Words
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introduced a new tax for not recycling the amount of garbage released. Change the verb form
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Therefore
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people
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the
items Correct article usage
apply
such
as bags and plastic bottles, and they collect the rubbish based on its materials (plastic, glass, paper). Linking Words
Moreover
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waste
and use Use synonyms
as
compost/fertilizers to plant. So, the United States is the perfect mimic Correct pronoun usage
it as
to
other countries and proved how far Change preposition
of
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laws could change Use synonyms
people
.
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On the other hand
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also
equally important. Linking Words
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, educating...
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people
will realize the reality and foster recycling. Use synonyms
Furthermore
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people
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waste
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reductions
people
following the proper Use synonyms
waste
control schemes and offering family trips to Sri Lanka. Use synonyms
This
method of promotion encourages individuals to follow a proper Linking Words
waste
control scheme.
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laws can make Use synonyms
people
recycle and Use synonyms
re-use
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however
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people
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situation.Linking Words
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