The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph below illustrates the rate of
intaking
of junk food by Australian adolescents between 1975 and 2000.
Replace the word
intake
Overall
, the numbers of consumption of fish and chips were the highest one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
in
the beginning of the time. Change the preposition
at
However
, there was a steady downgrade after some years. The proportion of intaking of pizza and hamburgers had a gradual upward trend through the whole period.
At
1975, the Change preposition
In
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
times
eaten
pizza and hamburgers Verb problem
apply
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
at
around 10 and 8 respectively. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, starting at the primary point to 1995, Fast Food excepting fish and chips were increasing dramatically reaching a peak with nearly at 100 and 85 times
. Therefore
, the
rest of the period to 2000, they remained unchanged.
On the other side, regarding to figures of Change preposition
for the
times
eaten fish and chips, it fluctuated steadily between 1975 and 1985. Nevertheless
, it had a downward trend that hit the lowest point with
approximately 39 Change preposition
apply
number of
Correct quantifier usage
apply
times
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Vocabulary: Replace the words times with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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