The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looka today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two map plans illustrate a Porth port that changed over 20 years,between 2000 and now.

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it is clear that

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the harbour changed from a rural area to a tourist place. Several buildings changed for tourists. The car park,Showers and toilets which are located in the north did not change in

this

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period. Fishing boats and Marina which was for private yachts changed their places. Docks, which were in the

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northern east

northeast

northernmost

and located near public beaches constructed.

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,new showers and toilets were built near the car park and Marina. New cafes and shops opened near Lifeboat.

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. The castle,which was in the southern east and didn't use for many years was replaced by a hotel. The public beach changed to a private one for hotel users.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 6 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

126 words

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