The maps below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looka today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The two map plans illustrate a Porth port that changed over 20 years,between 2000 and now.

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it is clear that

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the harbour changed from a rural area to a tourist place. Several buildings changed for tourists. The car park,Showers and toilets which are located in the north did not change in

this

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period. Fishing boats and Marina which was for private yachts changed their places. Docks, which were in the

northerneast

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northern east

northeast

northernmost

and located near public beaches constructed.

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,new showers and toilets were built near the car park and Marina. New cafes and shops opened near Lifeboat.

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. The castle,which was in the southern east and didn't use for many years was replaced by a hotel. The public beach changed to a private one for hotel users.

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