In some cultures, childrens are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

These days, we can see different areas have various cultures owing to the fact that climate, land, and so on have an effect on costumes.

For instance

, some of them teach children the thing

that is

really crucial to attending things that you want is that working hard.

While

these kinds of massages have benefits, I still believe that they cannot overshadow the drawbacks. On the one hand, hardworking massage has several merits.

Firstly

, when the young generations know the best way to obtain their goals is to work hard and spend both money and time on them

instead

of spending their time on other facts that are not important.

Secondly

,

this

tip sends them a message that if you do not focus on the one thing you are not able to have them owing to the fact that you are not trying for them, so the best choice to achieve them is working hard.

On the other hand

, the demerits of

this

kind of tip are varied. On the one side, if young people invest a great deal of not only time but

also

money in aims and they cannot achieve them, they will get

this

message that hard is not work and it is

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way. On the other side, some objectives are unrealities and inhabitants cannot achieve them today, like either living on other planets or travelling to Mars

while

these children want to attend;

however

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the older ones have to mention that some aims are not real and they cannot catch them.

To sum up

, working hard is the main factor for achieving a range of goals, but it is essential that we know chance and our technology have a lot of influence on our aim;

hence

, In my opinion, the good points of

this

message cannot eclipse the bad points.