The graph and chart provide information on the daily average maximum and minimum temperatures and the average number of days with rainfall in two cities in Australia

The graph and chart provide information on the daily average maximum and minimum temperatures and the average number of days with rainfall in two cities in Australia
The line graph illustrates the day-to-day average of the highest and lowest temperatures
while
the bar chart shows the average of how many
days
raining in
Brisbane
and
Canberra
. It can clearly be seen from the graph that
Brisbane
is higher in temperature compared to
Canberra
over the year. The chart depicts that generally, there are more
days
with rainfall in
Brisbane
than in
Canberra
. The line graph shows that
Brisbane
is hotter than
Canberra
. For both cities, the hottest period is in February with 30
degrees
maximum and around 26
degrees
minimum
while
in
Canberra
the highest is at around 20 and the lowest at approximately 17
degrees
.
Canberra
, which is colder, experiences the coldest period in July with 10
degrees
maximum and almost 0
degrees
minimum
whereas
Brisbane
only reaches the highest at above 20 and around 11 for the lowest. The bar chart depicts that
Brisbane
is generally has
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higher
days
of rain which peaks in February and March with 14
days
while
Canberra
is only with 7 and 8
days
, respectively.
Nonetheless
, between June and October,
Canberra
has more
days
with rainfall with 10
days
whereas
Brisbane
only with around 7 or 8
days
.
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