You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Smith, My name is Jimena Ilaria,

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college student, and I am writing to you in regard to some disturbances I have been facing the

last

weeks in my

room

. As you may be aware

of

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that

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we are in the

most tough

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part of the semester, having to take the final exam

at the end

of the month. My

college

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, the one with

who

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I am sharing the

room

, has been inviting friends to the

room

and

the

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stay

chating

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chatting

until midnight. Even though I had already told her several times that I

was needing

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silence in the

room

and to please go somewhere else with their friends,

it

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seems

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to not care. I would very much appreciate

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you could change me to another

room

, I do not mind sharing a flat with someone else, I do not really need to be

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my own but I really do need to be with someone respectful and understanding, that it is not the case right now. Thank you for

you

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attention on

this

matter, I eagerly await your response.

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sincerely, Jimena Ilaria