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The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent

The table below shows the projected costing over the next five years in american dollar for three environmental projects for sustainable foresty. the pie chart shows the expected expenditure brealdown allocation for the year as the projects are set up. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and male comparisons whre relevent
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The table gives information about the projected
cost
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 of sustainable forestry
projects
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 in three regions in the next five years
while
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 the chart illustrates budget allocation for the
projects
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 in the first
year
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. It is clearly seen from the table that the only region where the
cost
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 is expected to decrease is only in Central America. The pie chart shows that salaries are predicted to be the most allocated expenditure. The table shows that
projects
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 in Central America are projected to
cost
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 20
million
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 in
Year
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 1 but will drop to 12
million
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 in
Year
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 2 and decrease again to 5
million
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 in
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Year
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Years
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 3 to 5.
While
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projects
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 in West Africa are
also
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 expected to decrease from 10.5
million
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 in
Year
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 1 to 2.5
million
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 in
Year
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 4
,
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apply
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 but will increase in
Year
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 5 to 3.5
million
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.
Similarly
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, the
cost
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 for
projects
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 in Southeast Asia is predicted to fluctuate, with a drop from 30
million
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 in
Year
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 1 to 20
million
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 in
Year
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 2 but followed up with an increase to 40
million
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 and 50
million
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 in
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Year
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Years
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 4 and 5, respectively. The chart shows that half of the budget in
Year
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 1 will be allocated for wages.
In addition
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, the
cost
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 for the set-up process is expected to come in second at 30%.
Moreover
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, both training and office expenditures are projected to be the same at 10%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cost, projects, year, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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