The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares the average amount of
time
not-working people spent on their spare
time
activities during
last
year.
Overall
, women devoted most of their
time
to housework and shopping,
while
men were mostly occupied with finding a job, shopping and visiting relatives throughout the day.
To begin
, it is going to shops and household chores that females were invested in the most in the morning, with 26% and 49% respectively. The numbers were almost two times lower in the
afternoon
with 21% for housework and 17% for shopping. Followed by 13% for looking for a job and 17% for socialization in the
afternoon
.
However
, staying in bed and playing sports took up 0%, and drinking 1% among women in the
afternoon
. Regarding men, the highest numbers in the morning were for shopping and employment, being 20% and 22% respectively.
On the other hand
, gardening and watching TV were the most popular free-
time
activities in the
afternoon
. As for the least preferable ways to spend leisure
time
, drinking equalled 2% and 3% amongst men in the first part of the day and in the
afternoon
respectively.
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