The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of different nationalities living in Australia,
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the table provides a comparison of their distribution between urban and rural areas.
Overall
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, Australians make up the largest portion of the population. It is
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notable that the vast majority of residents from all nationalities prefer to live in urban areas rather than rural ones. Regarding the pie chart, local people represent nearly three-fourths of the total population. Next comes the group of British citizens with 7%.
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, individuals from China, New Zealand, and the Netherlands account for small percentages, 2%, 3% and 1% of people residing in Australia respectively. The remaining 14% come from other nations around the world. As can be seen in the table, a significant portion of all nationalities choose to live in cities rather than the countryside. The Chinese have the highest urban concentration, with 99% living in cities.
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, New Zealanders and the British show a strong preference for urban areas, with 90% and 89% living in cities, respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic data
  • population distribution
  • nationality groups
  • urban planning
  • cultural diversity
  • social policy
  • demographic trends
  • rural vs. urban distribution
  • reflect on the implications
  • cultural exchange
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