The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph illustrates the number of closed and
newly-opened
outlets in one country from 2011 to 2018.
Correct your spelling
newly opened
Overall
, both shop closures and openings fluctuated throughout the period
. Nonetheless
, the period
between 2015 to 2018 saw a big difference in trend that happened conversely
between shop closures and openings.
Closed shops fluctuated wildly over the given period
. It started at around 6,500 in 2011 and decreased to 6,000 in 2012 but increased moderately to around 7,100 in 2013. Nonetheless
, it dropped significantly to almost 700 in 2015 but recovered drastically to approximately 5,100 in 2016 and continued to moderately fluctuate.
Stall openings also
fluctuated radically throughout the period
. It dropped significantly from approximately 8,500 in 2011 to 4,000 in 2012 but increased drastically to 6,000 in 2014. The number then
dropped again to 4,000 in 2015 but after a steady period
between 2015 to 2017, it dipped to 3,000 by 2018.Submitted by aribawadzaki on
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