Some people believe that it is better to live in the countryside, while others believe that living in a city is more beneficial. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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will decide to have a
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need, And during
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introduction conclusion present
Begin your essay with a clear introduction that outlines the main points of both views and states your opinion.
relevant specific examples
Provide specific examples that support why you prefer to live in the city during the working days and in the countryside during weekends.
logical structure
Organize your essay into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea, for better logical flow and readability.
complete response
Expand on both perspectives by discussing the specific advantages and disadvantages, offering a more comprehensive response.
clear comprehensive ideas
You have clearly stated your personal preference and provided a reason for it, which is a good start.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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