The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the information
of
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on
requests
received by tourist
department, from the month of January to Correct article usage
the tourist
June
, in the United Kingdom. It also
shows three modes of contacts
through which Fix the agreement mistake
contact
requests
was
received, that are in person, by telephone and by Change the verb form
were
emails
.
As Fix the agreement mistake
email
for
as the letter or Correct your spelling
far
email
is concerned, Fix the agreement mistake
emails
near to
800 Correct your spelling
nearly
requests
were received in january
but after March dramatic decline in the emails and letters to Change the capitalization
January
tourist
office was noticed and remained constant from May to Correct article usage
the tourist
june
( near to 400).
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June
Moreover
, contact in person was less then
600 in January but with passing time sharp climb was seen from Replace the word
than
Feburary
to May which Correct your spelling
February
wasabout
400 in Correct your spelling
was about
Feburary
but reached Correct your spelling
February
to
1600 in May. Change preposition
apply
However
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However,
this
mode was at it
peak in Correct pronoun usage
its
June
as requests
to tourist block surpass
the number of 1800.
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surpassed
Furthermore
, More then
800 Replace the word
than
requests
was
recorded Change the verb form
were
through
telephone and gradually with time it reached Change preposition
by
to
1600 in Change preposition
apply
June
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