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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from january to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the information
of
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requests
 received by
tourist
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the tourist
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 department, from the month of January to
June
, in the United Kingdom. It
also
 shows three modes of
contacts
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contact
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 through which
requests
was
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were
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 received, that are in person, by telephone and by
emails
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email
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. As
for
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far
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 as the letter or
email
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emails
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 is concerned,
near to
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nearly
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 800
requests
 were received in
january
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January
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 but after March dramatic decline in the emails and letters to
tourist
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the tourist
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 office was noticed and remained constant from May to
june
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June
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 ( near to 400).
Moreover
, contact in person was less
then
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 600 in January but with passing time sharp climb was seen from
Feburary
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February
 to May which
wasabout
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was about
 400 in
Feburary
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February
 but reached
to
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1600 in May.
However
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this
 mode was at
it
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its
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 peak in
June
 as
requests
 to tourist block
surpass
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the number of 1800.
Furthermore
, More
then
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 800
requests
was
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were
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 recorded
through
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by
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 telephone and gradually with time it reached
to
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apply
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1600 in
June
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words requests, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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