The chart below shows the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the

reasons

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why

people

commute using cars and

bycicle

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bicycle

bicycles

. All in all, workers mainly choose to cycle to work because it reduces pollution and it encourages

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lifestyle. Meanwhile, most workers prefer to drive to their

office

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for comfort.

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one of the two

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why a big percentage of

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a bycicle

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bycicle

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bicycle

bicycles

. There are 30%

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who travel because it promotes fitness. The same exact number of

people

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choose cycling as a mode of travel as it produces less pollution.

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reasons

such

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driving account

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than 20%. 40% of

people

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cars

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as it provides comfort. Followed by the distance of their office with just above 21%.

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reasons

such

as having stuff to carry and saving more time than cycling share the same amount of percentage, which is 14%.

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, around 10% claim that driving gives more safety than cycling.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

163 words

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