The table below compares the income of secondary and high school teachers in five particular countries : Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Japan and Korea in 2009.
The given table compares data about how much money people who were teachers of secondary and high school earned in 5 various countries in 2009.
Overall
, it was important that when teachers spent a period of time they could earn the peak salaries, and the lowest time was for Denmark instead
of Japan; moreover
, the main country that had huge salaries was Luxembourg.
According to
the graph, Luxembourg had a perfect situation for their teacher owing to the fact that their incomes were more than the others by 80,000 in the beginning; then
they could earn 119,000 after 15 years
work
; Change preposition
of work
furthermore
, they scored 132,000 after 30 years
. The second one for earning was Denmark teachers. at the start, they earned 45,000, and after 8 years
, they were able to earn the highest amount of 54,000; additionally
, this
number was the same for the whole years
that they worked.
The diagram illustrates that populations who taught younger generations in Japan earned 34,000 in the first years
; thereafter
, their incomes climbed to 65,000 after 15 years
, also
this
figure reached 86,000 after 37 years
. The next ones were Korea and Australia, which had roughly the same number starting nearly
30,000. Later Australians after 9 Change preposition
at nearly
years
could earn the largest income at 48,000 then
their salaries were constant while
Koreans after 15 years
earned money the same as Australians; then
they after 34 years
earned 62,000.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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