The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart describes visitors' purposes for going to Orange City in 2017,2020, and
also
the prediction for 2030.
In general, the Linking Words
number
of visitors has increased over the past few years and it is predicted the figure will grow constantly in the future.
Of all activities, the sporting events have been favourable to the majority of people. About 150000 athletic lovers visited the stadium in 2017. Use synonyms
Additionally
, it climbed up to over 150000 and the figure in 2030 is forecasted to rise up and it will be larger than in 2020.
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According to
the statistics of people who love the Linking Words
theater
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theatre
this
kind of pastime is the least popular with tourists with probably a Linking Words
number
10000, and it became slightly larger after three years. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there will be a substantial increase in visits in 2030 with a Linking Words
number
nearly equivalent to 50000.
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Finally
, few people chose to attend concerts in 2017 and 2020. Linking Words
However
, the figures are larger than the cinema's. Linking Words
Then
, the concert is projected to attract plenty of music lovers and Linking Words
thus
, the Linking Words
number
will rocket up to over 100000.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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